Sunday, October 28, 2007
Monday Poetry Train- Halloween Edition
Okay, I tried for spooky, and everything I tried turned silly. But then I wrote this, and thought it fit somehow. Anyway, here it is, I hope you like it.
It was a dark and stormy night.
Shivering with cold and fright;
I made my cautious path,
Fleeing nature’s wrath.
What sight appeared,
That I feared?
That black
Cat.
Witch
That’s me
You see me
But you don’t know.
Tonight is my night
Celebrating the Fall
The gifts that this season brings
While renewing our hope for spring.
It was a dark and stormy night.
Shivering with cold and fright;
I made my cautious path,
Fleeing nature’s wrath.
What sight appeared,
That I feared?
That black
Cat.
Witch
That’s me
You see me
But you don’t know.
Tonight is my night
Celebrating the Fall
The gifts that this season brings
While renewing our hope for spring.
Sunday's Sven Check-In
This week has gone pretty well. I've been working every day, and making my words. I only missed one day this week. My total for this week: 4500. My total so far: 8280. For those of you not interested in Sven, I'll be back later to post my poem. I haven't written it yet, but I'll try to make it spooky. :)
Thursday, October 25, 2007
Friday Snippet
Yes, I'm actually posting a snippet. This is the third snippet I've posted from this work, it follows the previous two but not immediately. This is part of Cassie's day and shows Cassie meeting her new teacher, Adhara, and her family. I'll post a list of characters if you think it needs one. Enjoy.
The long neglected farm was empty no longer, and looked as if it had never been abandoned. Furthermore, it seemed as if a whole clan had moved in: aunts, uncles, cousins; the whole lot. Babies and toddlers were running around like crazy in the cool air, some in just nappies and some without a stitch.
Suddenly one of the women, a tall woman with white blond hair, turquoise eyes, and a tan that spoke of being out a great deal in the bright sunlight, looked up, saw Cassie and exclaimed, “Kids! Time to go. School’s starting soon.” And gathering up a stack of books and papers, she headed in Cassie’s direction. “You must be Cassie,” she greeted Cassie like she’d been expecting her, holding her hand out for Cassie to shake. “I’m Adhara. I’ll be one of your teachers this year. Come on kids,” she called out as the older children were putting on shoes, gathering gear, and following after her. “It doesn’t look good for the teacher to be late on the first day!”
Cassie just stood there, speechless; she had never seen anyone like her before, and thought she was perhaps the most beautiful woman she had ever seen. Watching as she walked over to where Cassie stood gave Cassie a funny feeling. Adhara moved with a grace and freedom of movement that reminded Cassie of the dolphins she’d seen in her dreams just last night.
She was wearing flat, heelless shoes and a long flowing gown of deep cobalt blue, embroidered at the neck, belted at the waist with a long silken cord, and with long loose sleeves that ended in tightly buttoned, embroidered cuffs at each wrist. And her white blond hair was not up, but instead braided into a single plait down the center of her back. Even the town’s nosiest busybody would not be able to find fault with what she wore, as they frequently commented shrilly about Cassie’s attire. Cassie was so busy looking at her; she almost missed what Adhara was saying.
“You probably don’t remember me, but you and your mum lived with my partner and me before you and she moved to Mizar, when you were a baby. I was so very sorry to hear that she had died. She was a dear friend, and we all miss her terribly. If there is ever anything I or my partner can do for you, please don’t hesitate to ask.”
“Thank you,” Cassie replied shyly, silently vowing herself to make sure she never needed to ask. What would this nice woman think of her if she only knew what had really happened. She knew my mum, Cassie mused sadly. She was my mum’s friend. Maybe she would have helped us; I wonder why my mum never asked for help, or why she never told me about them.
“I was told that you lived in the farm on the other side of the creek,” Adhara changed the subject and smiled encouragingly as they walked side by side through the woods, “I figured you probably used this as a short cut.”
“You don’t mind me cutting through, do you?” Cassie looked up at her with some trepidation, but glad to talk about something that didn’t produce tears and runny noses. Letting the other children see her cry had only made them crueler in their teasing, not that she would tell Adhara that. Cassie knew from hard experience that trusting any adult other than her mum, and now Acamar, was a risky business, but something in Adhara’s face made Cassie want to trust her, “It’s a lot longer the other way.” For some reason, this new teacher reminded her of Adharshala.
“Not at all,” Adhara smiled in agreement, carefully watching the reactions of the child who, though Cassie wasn’t aware of it, was the reason that Adhara and her family had come to this town, “it must save you quite a bit of time each morning. Is there a bridge over the creek?”
“Nah, just a fallen log,” Cassie explained, smiling in relief before continuing, “but it’s really wide and usually pretty stable. But I should warn you, with all the babies running around at your farm, the creek is running high and fast. A lot higher and faster than normal for this time of year, you’ll want to keep the babies away from it.”
“Thanks, that’s good to know. Mara, did you hear that? Could you go run and tell your mum? Thanks lovey.” And at that a young girl with honey blond hair and blue eyes gave Cassie a quick smile in greeting before turning around and running back towards home with an easy ground eating pace. “She’s the fastest of the lot; I wouldn’t be surprised if she beat us to the school.”
“She’s not yours?” Cassie asked somewhat timidly, not sure what to make of a teacher as friendly as Adhara.
“Yes and no.” Adhara smiled at Cassie’s look of confusion. “I’m not her mum, but I help raise her. Her mum’s my partner; we each have kids and raise them all together. Would you like me to introduce you to the troops? Alright troops! Form ranks!” And Cassie was amazed when the children all lined up according to age, and she could finally see how many there were. She was also interested to notice that even though the girls were all dressed in a style similar to Adhara’s dress, they each seemed to have definite preferences as to colors.
“Mara just left,” Adhara began the introduction, “She’s eleven and she belongs to Selene. This is Shala, she’s also eleven, and she’s mine.” Adhara pointed to the tallest, a pretty, smiling girl who had her mother’s white blond hair but with hazel eyes, only a little shorter than Cassie herself. The just departed Mara and Shala seemed to have chosen coordinating colors: Mara’s dress was dark blue with a cream colored shirt underneath, while Shala wore a dark brown dress with a pale blue shirt.
“Shala, that’s a pretty name, what does it mean?” Cassie asked, remembering her dream and Adharshala’s parting remark “I know some Old Tongue, but I’m not familiar with that; Tahala means starlight, is it close?”
“Sort of. In Old Tongue, Shala means bright star,” Shala answered blushing, before adding, “But it also means ‘beloved’ or ‘darling’.” Now it was Cassie’s turn to blush, she’d never had anyone except her mum ever say they loved her before. She quickly decided that she liked it, and couldn’t wait for the chance to call Adharshala that as well.
“I’m Aludra, and she’s Dahlia,” the next in line said, another girl with the kind of dark brown hair that Cassie knew must have been towheaded as a baby. She had her mother’s sea blue eyes and smiled as she pointed first to herself and then to the girl beside her, a sweet faced girl with honey blond hair and gray-green eyes, who looked up from her book only long enough to give Cassie a quick smile. Aludra draped her arm over Dahlia’s shoulder and added, “We’re ten.” Cassie thought it interesting that though both girls were wearing the same dress, a plain gray tunic, the different colored shirts underneath (Dahlia’s a pale pink and Aludra’s a dark blue) and belting around the waist made the two girls’ outfits look completely different.
“And I’m guessing that you’re Adhara’s. Right?” The children all giggled and nodded their approval.
“I’m Cintha, and I’m nine.” The next in line, a lonely-looking girl with honey blond hair and cornflower blue eyes sighed. Her dress and the shirt underneath were both in shade of green, with the shirt being the paler shade.
“My Zosma spent the summer with his Da and she misses him something fierce.
Don’t you, pet.” The little girl nodded, smiling sadly at Cassie.
“I’ll play with you.” Smiling at the hopeful look on the child’s sweet face, Cassie thought that she may miss Zosma but guessed it was hard to be lonely for too long with this lot around.
“My name’s Amalthaea, but everyone just calls me Thaea.” The blond girl began; her outfit was a dress of undyed linen and a floral print shirt. Although her hair was not as pale as the older girls, Cassie knew that she was Adhara’s. Her eyes were also hazel, but seemed a darker shade than Shala’s.
“And I’m Cory. Okay, it’s really Corydalis, but you can call me Cory.” The little girl with the light brown hair and gray-green eyes continued, again her eyes and her hair were darker than her sisters, but the resemblance was still there. Unlike the other girls who seemed to have been influenced by the choices of their year mates, Cory’s choice of clothes seemed to have not been influenced at all by Thaea’s choice; her choice had been a dark blue shirt under a plaid overdress.
“And we’re six.” The two finished in unison.
“Well, my name is really Cassiopeia,” Cassie answered with a grin, “but everyone just calls me Cassie. And I’m please to meet you.”
“And these are Tansy and Pansy, and they’re just five.” Adhara rested her hands on the heads of the two little girls who were now clinging to her skirts and hiding behind her, peeking out every once in a while and giggling. “And if you figured out the hair colors, you know that Tansy is mine and Pansy is Selene’s. We didn’t mean to give them those names; we tried calling them a variety of names, and these just kind of stuck. Actually, they got lucky.” Adhara laughed, remembering, “They were almost named Port and Starboard.”
Cassie was amused to see that at first glance neither girl’s outfits matched; the tops clashed awfully with the short pants each girl was wearing, until she realized the girls must have gotten dressed and then exchanged their tops. The result was an interesting clash but neither girl seemed to care in the least.
“That’s a lot of kids.”
“You’re telling me, but that’s what I get for falling in love with an Earthie,” Adhara laughed and Cassie joined in, glad to have someone with whom she could share a laugh. Cassie wasn’t quite sure what Adhara meant by calling her partner “an Earthie”, though, and so just let that part slide, not feeling comfortable enough to ask, “You can meet the babies later. Not all of the babies at the farm are ours though; some belong to the people who came with us to help us move in and make repairs on the farm.”
As they continued walking, Adhara told Cassie about the repairs they had already made to the roof and the barn. “I never asked. How old are you?” Adhara asked, suddenly changing the subject.
“I’m twelve. I’ll be thirteen this spring, so I take my classes with the older kids.”
“Really, that’s wonderful,” Adhara exclaimed with a smile, and went on to explain, “That means you’ll be in my class this morning.” Cassie smiled brightly at that. Perhaps this would be a good year.
The long neglected farm was empty no longer, and looked as if it had never been abandoned. Furthermore, it seemed as if a whole clan had moved in: aunts, uncles, cousins; the whole lot. Babies and toddlers were running around like crazy in the cool air, some in just nappies and some without a stitch.
Suddenly one of the women, a tall woman with white blond hair, turquoise eyes, and a tan that spoke of being out a great deal in the bright sunlight, looked up, saw Cassie and exclaimed, “Kids! Time to go. School’s starting soon.” And gathering up a stack of books and papers, she headed in Cassie’s direction. “You must be Cassie,” she greeted Cassie like she’d been expecting her, holding her hand out for Cassie to shake. “I’m Adhara. I’ll be one of your teachers this year. Come on kids,” she called out as the older children were putting on shoes, gathering gear, and following after her. “It doesn’t look good for the teacher to be late on the first day!”
Cassie just stood there, speechless; she had never seen anyone like her before, and thought she was perhaps the most beautiful woman she had ever seen. Watching as she walked over to where Cassie stood gave Cassie a funny feeling. Adhara moved with a grace and freedom of movement that reminded Cassie of the dolphins she’d seen in her dreams just last night.
She was wearing flat, heelless shoes and a long flowing gown of deep cobalt blue, embroidered at the neck, belted at the waist with a long silken cord, and with long loose sleeves that ended in tightly buttoned, embroidered cuffs at each wrist. And her white blond hair was not up, but instead braided into a single plait down the center of her back. Even the town’s nosiest busybody would not be able to find fault with what she wore, as they frequently commented shrilly about Cassie’s attire. Cassie was so busy looking at her; she almost missed what Adhara was saying.
“You probably don’t remember me, but you and your mum lived with my partner and me before you and she moved to Mizar, when you were a baby. I was so very sorry to hear that she had died. She was a dear friend, and we all miss her terribly. If there is ever anything I or my partner can do for you, please don’t hesitate to ask.”
“Thank you,” Cassie replied shyly, silently vowing herself to make sure she never needed to ask. What would this nice woman think of her if she only knew what had really happened. She knew my mum, Cassie mused sadly. She was my mum’s friend. Maybe she would have helped us; I wonder why my mum never asked for help, or why she never told me about them.
“I was told that you lived in the farm on the other side of the creek,” Adhara changed the subject and smiled encouragingly as they walked side by side through the woods, “I figured you probably used this as a short cut.”
“You don’t mind me cutting through, do you?” Cassie looked up at her with some trepidation, but glad to talk about something that didn’t produce tears and runny noses. Letting the other children see her cry had only made them crueler in their teasing, not that she would tell Adhara that. Cassie knew from hard experience that trusting any adult other than her mum, and now Acamar, was a risky business, but something in Adhara’s face made Cassie want to trust her, “It’s a lot longer the other way.” For some reason, this new teacher reminded her of Adharshala.
“Not at all,” Adhara smiled in agreement, carefully watching the reactions of the child who, though Cassie wasn’t aware of it, was the reason that Adhara and her family had come to this town, “it must save you quite a bit of time each morning. Is there a bridge over the creek?”
“Nah, just a fallen log,” Cassie explained, smiling in relief before continuing, “but it’s really wide and usually pretty stable. But I should warn you, with all the babies running around at your farm, the creek is running high and fast. A lot higher and faster than normal for this time of year, you’ll want to keep the babies away from it.”
“Thanks, that’s good to know. Mara, did you hear that? Could you go run and tell your mum? Thanks lovey.” And at that a young girl with honey blond hair and blue eyes gave Cassie a quick smile in greeting before turning around and running back towards home with an easy ground eating pace. “She’s the fastest of the lot; I wouldn’t be surprised if she beat us to the school.”
“She’s not yours?” Cassie asked somewhat timidly, not sure what to make of a teacher as friendly as Adhara.
“Yes and no.” Adhara smiled at Cassie’s look of confusion. “I’m not her mum, but I help raise her. Her mum’s my partner; we each have kids and raise them all together. Would you like me to introduce you to the troops? Alright troops! Form ranks!” And Cassie was amazed when the children all lined up according to age, and she could finally see how many there were. She was also interested to notice that even though the girls were all dressed in a style similar to Adhara’s dress, they each seemed to have definite preferences as to colors.
“Mara just left,” Adhara began the introduction, “She’s eleven and she belongs to Selene. This is Shala, she’s also eleven, and she’s mine.” Adhara pointed to the tallest, a pretty, smiling girl who had her mother’s white blond hair but with hazel eyes, only a little shorter than Cassie herself. The just departed Mara and Shala seemed to have chosen coordinating colors: Mara’s dress was dark blue with a cream colored shirt underneath, while Shala wore a dark brown dress with a pale blue shirt.
“Shala, that’s a pretty name, what does it mean?” Cassie asked, remembering her dream and Adharshala’s parting remark “I know some Old Tongue, but I’m not familiar with that; Tahala means starlight, is it close?”
“Sort of. In Old Tongue, Shala means bright star,” Shala answered blushing, before adding, “But it also means ‘beloved’ or ‘darling’.” Now it was Cassie’s turn to blush, she’d never had anyone except her mum ever say they loved her before. She quickly decided that she liked it, and couldn’t wait for the chance to call Adharshala that as well.
“I’m Aludra, and she’s Dahlia,” the next in line said, another girl with the kind of dark brown hair that Cassie knew must have been towheaded as a baby. She had her mother’s sea blue eyes and smiled as she pointed first to herself and then to the girl beside her, a sweet faced girl with honey blond hair and gray-green eyes, who looked up from her book only long enough to give Cassie a quick smile. Aludra draped her arm over Dahlia’s shoulder and added, “We’re ten.” Cassie thought it interesting that though both girls were wearing the same dress, a plain gray tunic, the different colored shirts underneath (Dahlia’s a pale pink and Aludra’s a dark blue) and belting around the waist made the two girls’ outfits look completely different.
“And I’m guessing that you’re Adhara’s. Right?” The children all giggled and nodded their approval.
“I’m Cintha, and I’m nine.” The next in line, a lonely-looking girl with honey blond hair and cornflower blue eyes sighed. Her dress and the shirt underneath were both in shade of green, with the shirt being the paler shade.
“My Zosma spent the summer with his Da and she misses him something fierce.
Don’t you, pet.” The little girl nodded, smiling sadly at Cassie.
“I’ll play with you.” Smiling at the hopeful look on the child’s sweet face, Cassie thought that she may miss Zosma but guessed it was hard to be lonely for too long with this lot around.
“My name’s Amalthaea, but everyone just calls me Thaea.” The blond girl began; her outfit was a dress of undyed linen and a floral print shirt. Although her hair was not as pale as the older girls, Cassie knew that she was Adhara’s. Her eyes were also hazel, but seemed a darker shade than Shala’s.
“And I’m Cory. Okay, it’s really Corydalis, but you can call me Cory.” The little girl with the light brown hair and gray-green eyes continued, again her eyes and her hair were darker than her sisters, but the resemblance was still there. Unlike the other girls who seemed to have been influenced by the choices of their year mates, Cory’s choice of clothes seemed to have not been influenced at all by Thaea’s choice; her choice had been a dark blue shirt under a plaid overdress.
“And we’re six.” The two finished in unison.
“Well, my name is really Cassiopeia,” Cassie answered with a grin, “but everyone just calls me Cassie. And I’m please to meet you.”
“And these are Tansy and Pansy, and they’re just five.” Adhara rested her hands on the heads of the two little girls who were now clinging to her skirts and hiding behind her, peeking out every once in a while and giggling. “And if you figured out the hair colors, you know that Tansy is mine and Pansy is Selene’s. We didn’t mean to give them those names; we tried calling them a variety of names, and these just kind of stuck. Actually, they got lucky.” Adhara laughed, remembering, “They were almost named Port and Starboard.”
Cassie was amused to see that at first glance neither girl’s outfits matched; the tops clashed awfully with the short pants each girl was wearing, until she realized the girls must have gotten dressed and then exchanged their tops. The result was an interesting clash but neither girl seemed to care in the least.
“That’s a lot of kids.”
“You’re telling me, but that’s what I get for falling in love with an Earthie,” Adhara laughed and Cassie joined in, glad to have someone with whom she could share a laugh. Cassie wasn’t quite sure what Adhara meant by calling her partner “an Earthie”, though, and so just let that part slide, not feeling comfortable enough to ask, “You can meet the babies later. Not all of the babies at the farm are ours though; some belong to the people who came with us to help us move in and make repairs on the farm.”
As they continued walking, Adhara told Cassie about the repairs they had already made to the roof and the barn. “I never asked. How old are you?” Adhara asked, suddenly changing the subject.
“I’m twelve. I’ll be thirteen this spring, so I take my classes with the older kids.”
“Really, that’s wonderful,” Adhara exclaimed with a smile, and went on to explain, “That means you’ll be in my class this morning.” Cassie smiled brightly at that. Perhaps this would be a good year.
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Thursday Thirteen- The Halloween Edition!
Sunday, October 21, 2007
Monday's Poetry Train
Okay, for today's poem -- I blame Joely. She had posted a comment on her blog saying that she was writing a poem dedicated to PBW in the hopes that she would return to the blogosphere. I posted a comment suggesting limmericks, and included a first line, so then of course I had to post it, and did on her blog. But then I thought I would share this with you all. Joely's is a much better poem, by the way, but for a limmerick, mine's not half bad. And PBW, if you're reading this, please post and let us know you're okay (and probably busy- we understand). Don't make me pull out the puns. :)
There was a great writer named Lynn
Who gave us the vampires Darkyn
To get her to log
Into her great blog
I might have to write this agin.
Friday's Snippetless
NO snippet again. Life has been intervening. I've been working pretty regularly on my writing just didn't get to posting yesterday (okay I was planning to post, and trying to think of what to post when I fell asleep- oops), and had to work today so it was either write for Sven or post. So I wrote. I made my words for the day, and now I'm off to bed (and at a decent hour, yay). Good night all.
P.S. I will post this week, I promise.
P.S. I will post this week, I promise.
Thursday, October 18, 2007
Thursday Thirteen...#I don't know
I know. It's 10:24 and I'm only now posting my TT? Yup, and not only that but Friday's post will be put up sometime tomorrow (also much later than usual). So what's up? Well, this morning it wasn't me. I had the day off, and after feeding the psycho kitty I went back to bed and the next I knew it was 12:00. The rest of the afternoon was spent reading Bitten by Kelley Armstron and watching TV. One of the movies I caught was Shakespeare in Love, and as I couldn't think of anything to write for my TT list, I came up with this. I took a class on Shakespeare as an undergrad, and again as a grad student (many many moons ago).
13 Shakespeare Plays I've Studied in School
1) Hamlet (if you want to watch this as a movie, get the Mel Gibson version- very entertaining- great acting, lots of action).
2)Macbeth- I know I've seen this, just not sure when or who was involved. I love that Tolkien invented the Ents after seeing this play.
3) Midsummer Night's Dream- there is also a good movie version of this out, starring just about everybody. :)
4) Romeo & Juliet- No, I haven't seen the Leonardo DiCaprio version, not sure I want to.
5) King Lear- there's a movie version with Ian Holm that's on my to be watched list.
6) Antony & Cleopatra- yes I know Elizabeth Taylor and Richard Burton did this. No, I don't want to watch it, ever again. :)
7) Julius Caesar- I'm sure I've seen this, just can't remember which one, if indeed there are more than one.
8) Richard III- Ian McKellan did a very interesting revisioning of this set in WWII, still wouldn't mind finding a movie version set back in the correct period.
9) Henry V- I like the Kennth Brannagh version more than the Olivier version (which is still awesome moviemaking).
10) First Part Henry IV- Haven't seen, but read many times.
11) Taming of the Shrew- Okay, it's not true to the play, but I love Kiss Me Kate. I mean one of the songs actually starts, "Brush up your Shakespeare..." Love it.
12) All's Well that Ends Well- I'm sure I studied this at some point, but that's all I can seem to remember.
13) The Tempest- Movie version? I'm not sure. "Ah, what a brave new world that has such men in it."
After this, I've got the urge to reread some of the bard's finest. Sonnets, anyone?
13 Shakespeare Plays I've Studied in School
1) Hamlet (if you want to watch this as a movie, get the Mel Gibson version- very entertaining- great acting, lots of action).
2)Macbeth- I know I've seen this, just not sure when or who was involved. I love that Tolkien invented the Ents after seeing this play.
3) Midsummer Night's Dream- there is also a good movie version of this out, starring just about everybody. :)
4) Romeo & Juliet- No, I haven't seen the Leonardo DiCaprio version, not sure I want to.
5) King Lear- there's a movie version with Ian Holm that's on my to be watched list.
6) Antony & Cleopatra- yes I know Elizabeth Taylor and Richard Burton did this. No, I don't want to watch it, ever again. :)
7) Julius Caesar- I'm sure I've seen this, just can't remember which one, if indeed there are more than one.
8) Richard III- Ian McKellan did a very interesting revisioning of this set in WWII, still wouldn't mind finding a movie version set back in the correct period.
9) Henry V- I like the Kennth Brannagh version more than the Olivier version (which is still awesome moviemaking).
10) First Part Henry IV- Haven't seen, but read many times.
11) Taming of the Shrew- Okay, it's not true to the play, but I love Kiss Me Kate. I mean one of the songs actually starts, "Brush up your Shakespeare..." Love it.
12) All's Well that Ends Well- I'm sure I studied this at some point, but that's all I can seem to remember.
13) The Tempest- Movie version? I'm not sure. "Ah, what a brave new world that has such men in it."
After this, I've got the urge to reread some of the bard's finest. Sonnets, anyone?
Sunday, October 14, 2007
I'm posting another of my favorite Emily Dickinson poems today. I've got a couple poems in the works, but none far enough along to offer to the poetry train. I'm starting the Second 70 Days of Sweat tomorrow, and hope to finish both the challenge and my WIP this time. My goal this time is 750 words a day (and this time, to write every day, even if it is only 750 words). Enjoy.
318
I'll tell you how the Sun rose—
A Ribbon at a time—
The Steeples swam in Amethyst—
The news, like Squirrels, ran—
The Hills untied their Bonnets—
The Bobolinks—begun—
Then I said softly to myself—
"That must have been the Sun"!
But how he set—I know not—
There seemed a purple stile
That little Yellow boys and girls
Were climbing all the while—
Till when they reached the other side,
A Dominie in Gray—
Put gently up the evening Bars—
And led the flock away—
318
I'll tell you how the Sun rose—
A Ribbon at a time—
The Steeples swam in Amethyst—
The news, like Squirrels, ran—
The Hills untied their Bonnets—
The Bobolinks—begun—
Then I said softly to myself—
"That must have been the Sun"!
But how he set—I know not—
There seemed a purple stile
That little Yellow boys and girls
Were climbing all the while—
Till when they reached the other side,
A Dominie in Gray—
Put gently up the evening Bars—
And led the flock away—
Emily Dickinson
Friday, October 12, 2007
Friday Snippets
No snippet today, sorry. I haven't done much writing lately, and I got so distracted checking everybodies Thursday Thirteen that I ran out of time last night (oops). But I am starting the second go round of the Sweating with Sven on Monday, so I'll be back up and running with snippets next week. I hope everybody has a great weekend, I'll be around this weekend to check out everybody's snippets and get caught up. TTFN. Ann
Wednesday, October 10, 2007
Sunday, October 07, 2007
Monday's Poetry Train
Hi! I'm back! And for the most part allergy free! It was a great trip, I had a wonderful time, and I got to go camping (It was so cold that night, and I wouldn't have missed it for the world). I wrote most of this that night, watching the fire burning in the fire pit and the animals around us (I meant to take pictures, but only ended up taking two or three, but if they turn out I'll share). Hope you like it.
Campfire Meditations
Cool jazz tunes stir the trees
To share a dance with the breeze
Cinders flit and embers snap
Crickets chirp and tent lines flap,
A wind born syncopated bass
Squirrels fly by from trunk to trunk
A pickup game of catch and chase
The robins walk by, the long day done
Hunt and peck, hide and flee
And as the cool night settles,
Calling the fog clouds home
I sit and watch seeking inspiration
Waiting for my muse to come.
Campfire Meditations
Cool jazz tunes stir the trees
To share a dance with the breeze
Cinders flit and embers snap
Crickets chirp and tent lines flap,
A wind born syncopated bass
Squirrels fly by from trunk to trunk
A pickup game of catch and chase
The robins walk by, the long day done
Hunt and peck, hide and flee
And as the cool night settles,
Calling the fog clouds home
I sit and watch seeking inspiration
Waiting for my muse to come.
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