Thursday, April 26, 2007

Just a sample

I wanted to post a small sample of what I'm working on, and get your impressions. Is it good? Does it make you hungry? Whenever I read Pat Conroy's The Prince of Tides or Beach Music, his descriptions of food are so good my mouth starts watering. That's the kind of effect I'm going for. :o). Enjoy.

The restaurant may not have been far, but once we were off our street I quickly got lost as we made one turn after another. After we turned down a side street, whose name I never caught, we soon reached the restaurant, whose name was in Italian and in a script my brain refused to translate. The Drs. Watson were evidently regulars for they were greeted like long lost family, and we were soon seated at a small booth in a quiet corner with a bottle of wine and plates of warm bread and butter without even being asked.

“How were things at home?” Dr. John asked as he poured me a glass of the wine, now that we were in a place where I was above the legal drinking age. “How are Cormac and Deirdre? Are they both okay?”

Sipping the lovely Italian red, I knew he wasn’t asking just to be polite. The Drs. Watson had met my mum and her twin several times during my time at college, and had become friends with them both. I thought it only fitting, after all Cormac and Deirdre are the two most important people in my life at home, and totally awesome people besides. Not that I’m biased or anything.

“Dee didn’t freak too badly watching her baby get on a big jet plane ready to fly all by herself across the great big ocean, did she?” Laura paused as the waiter served our salads and left before continuing, “The trip was okay?”

“They’re both fine. We had a nice relaxing Christmas. Mum, Cor, and the aunts got together, decided I needed a break before I hit grad school, and gave me the money for my ticket as a graduation present. I think mum cried more at the airport than when they first took me to school. Okay, all three of us were bawling like babies. But the flight over was a breeze.” The smile I gave them was as much in relief as it was in thanks. To say that things had been getting bad at home was an understatement of Titanic proportions. I’d not had any job offers before graduation, despite some very serious job hunting, and this trip gave me some much needed breathing room to decide what to do with my life without my grandparents and great-grandfather’s attempts at intimidation and coercion.

The salad had been replaced with soup, filled with vegetables and pieces of chicken and smelling of Italy. It was during one of those naturally occurring silences when everyone had their mouths full that I quickly swallowed and asked the question that had begun to worry me, “So what do you want me to do while you’re gone? And are you going to be gone the entire time I’m here? The place is gorgeous by the way. And I noticed the reproduction Adams mantles in the living room and the library. Very cool.”

“I’m glad you like them,” Dr. John teased. “We’ll know just where to look if they turn up missing.” Turning serious for a moment, he looked across the table at me and added, “Just keep an eye on the house when you’re in the city, but don’t feel as if you have to spend all of your time here, we want you to feel free to travel around and see as much of the country as you want. And then in the spring if the offer is still open, if you could do your usual magic with the garden. I think we should confess that we did come up with the house sitting as an excuse to get you over here. But I would feel better if the house weren’t left empty.”

The talking was stopped temporarily by the appearance of the main dish, braised pork with potatoes and onions and carrots in a sauce with just a few stewed tomatoes to sweeten the dish. We ate giving our dinner the attention it deserved and then thanked the chef profusely when he came to say hello to Dr. John and Laura and to present desert: a luscious chocolate cake served warm with home-made vanilla ice cream and smothered in thick, creamy hot fudge and topped with whipped cream and a cherry on top.

Thirteen More Things I've Learned Lately


1) Geese have the right of way-- always.
2) Ducks too.
3) Plants that look dead...aren't always dead, just resting (yeah).
4) Just because your allergies have never given you sneezes and goopy watery eyes ever before...doesn't mean they won't.
5) Somehow your baggy jeans can get less baggy and your too tight jeans can suddenly fit- both at the same time.
6) Leaving home convinced I'm going to be late invariably gets me there early, leaving home convinced I'll be on time invariably gets me there late.
7) The most sure-fire, not-fail way to find a book you've misplaced (or anything actually) is to go out and buy another copy.
8) Winning prizes is good, giving prizes is good too. Hearing that friends have won prizes is way cool (Congrats Joely).
9) Last night at well past sunset, it was 82 degrees- in my apartment.
10) Most likely it was much cooler outside
11) I could feel it in the weak pitiful breeze that made it in my one window.
12) It's too soon to have to put on the A/C, dammit.
13) I'm having a hard time paying attention to just about anything, which is why it took me so long to come up with 13 today.
(But the weekend is in sight- yeah).

Links to other Thursday Thirteens!
1. Shiloh Walker
2. Charlene Teglia
3. Rhian/Crowwoman
4. Shannon Stacey
5.(leave your link in comments, I’ll add you here!)



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Saturday, April 21, 2007

I Can See!

Had an eye exam today, and got New Contact Lenses! Yeah team! Wahoo!! (Can you tell I really and truly don't like glasses?) How near-sighted am I? At one point the guy doing the preliminary testing before the doctor saw me asked me to take my glasses off and look at the eye chart and tell him which line I could read. I couldn't see the chart, there were no letters on the wall, just a gray smudge. But with my contacts I have 20/20 vision. Yeah.
On the other hand, it's hard to see when you're sneezing so flipping much. Argh! What's with the pollen? I feel like I've been mugged by a tree. And I don't think I've ever sneezed as much as I have lately.
Well, that's it for me. I'm going off line. I'm going to write some, and then take a nap, and later go out to dinner with Katie (who's at work today). Tomorrow we will celebrate the annual migration of the ficus tree. :o).
Ann

Wednesday, April 18, 2007

Witches, and Shifters, and Weres...Oh My


Thirteen of my Favorite Paranormal Series


Again, not a complete list, and to simplify things vampires are not included. I'm sure I'll get to a list of them eventually. Not in any particular order, that would require more brain power and more attention than I currently possess.

1. Laurell K. Hamilton- the Merry Gentry books.
2. Mary Janice Davidson- Swimming with the fishes (gotta love a mermaid named Fred).
3. Shanna Swendson- Enchanted Inc, Once Upon Stilettos.
4. Katie MacAlister- You Slay Me, Fire Me Up- Dragons...
5. Carrie Vaughn- Kitty and the Midnight Caller, Kitty Goes to Washington...
6. Marjorie Liu- Tiger Eye, Red Heart of Jade...
7. Eileen Wilks- I know, I've listed her before, tough.
8. Rachel Caine- Weather Warden Series
9. C.E. Murphy- Urban Shaman, Thunderbird Falls
10. Sherrilyn Kenyon- Pretty much all of them :o).
11. Rebecca York- Crimson Moon...
12. Susan Krinard- Touch of the Wolf, Once a Wolf, Secret of the Wolf...
13. Cheyenne McCray- Forbidden Magic


Links to other Thursday Thirteens!
1. She
2. Joely Sue Burkhart
3. Yolanda(leave your link in comments, I’ll add you here!)



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Tuesday, April 17, 2007

Third Draft

Well, the bad news is the Dayjob is sucking my brains out and leaving me with mush, the good news is that despite this I have started writing again. The second draft hit a wall, so I went directly to the third draft, changing the tone, the direction, and even many plot complications. I have a sneaky suspicion that one of my main characters might die, I don't know yet. Anyway, I decided to post my first paragraph to see what you think of my new direction.

I don’t think “How I came to be a Witch” would be considered the typical title, or subject for the average essay applying to the ordinary grad school program. Nor do I imagine that most grad school applicants begin their essays by stating that if they don’t get accepted into the particular grad program to which they are applying that they most likely will be dead before the year is out. But the wounds are too new and I now have hostages to fate, innocent souls who are more dear to me than my own life, and for them I will say this, if you do not help me I will die and they who depend on me will be at the mercy of those who brought about my ruin. I’ve been told that you need to know this, and as I trust implicitly the one who told me this, I will tell you my story.

Interested? Want more? Either way, let me know (I'm needing feedback).

Friday, April 13, 2007

Friday the Thirteenth (Blah)

I was blog hopping this morning looking for something I could write about, and not having much luck, then I went to Laurie King's blog and she wrote about a new feature that Bantam Dell has started. Called Booked for Breakfast, it's an email mystery book club where each week they feature a different author and every morning in that week they send you a 5 minute section of one of that author's books. So if you're interested click here and sign up.

Disclaimer- I know no one who works at Bantam Dell, nor am I getting any remuneration for this blog. They do say, however, that if you refer a friend you can email them and they will send you a free book. Yup, it's all about the free books, baby. :o)

P.S. I've got to get me some of those emoticons, if someone would tell me where and how? Thanks, Ann

Thursday, April 12, 2007


Thirteen Songs I Listen to While Writing


Again, this is nowhere near a complete list. I could do a whole nother list with nothing but piano music, or orchestral pieces. But I’ll leave those for another day :o).
1. Whistle Down the Wind- Andrew Lloyd Weber
2. Something (and Here Comes the Sun)- The Beatles
3. Comin Round Again- Carly Simon
4. Suo-Gan- Charlotte Church (don’t know who wrote it)
5. Both Sides Now- Clannad w/ Paul Young (Joanie Mitchell)
6. White Flag- Dido
7. Landslide- Dixie Chicks (Stevie Nicks)
8. My Immortal- Evanescence
9. May It Be- Enya (Howard Shore)
10. Into the West- Annie Lennox (Howard Shore et al.)
11. Carolina in my Mind- James Taylor
12. Kiss Me- Sixpence None the Richer
13. Everytime We Say Goodbye- Annie Lennox (from Red, Hot, & Blue)
and as a bonus :o)
14. Do I Love You- Aztec Camera (also from Red, Hot, & Blue)



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1. (leave your link in comments, I’ll add you here!)



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Sunday, April 08, 2007

And the winners are.....

Everyone!!!! Since only a few people replied to my Thursday Thirteen, everybody will get two of my favorite first novels. So if Joely (Joely Sue?) and Ravaj would email me their mailing addresses to aedmartin@hotmail.com, I will mail their packages to them (and let me know if you would prefer something from the mystery list or the scifi/fantasy list). Jenn, I'll get you yours the next time I see you (or the next time we go to B&N). And have a Happy Easter and a good week.

Saturday, April 07, 2007

Extreme TP

I saw this last night and had to write about it, this was just something I had to share (and see what you think).

I was walking through the Barnes & Noble parking lot last night, having made my usual donation to their corporate coffers (I bought For a Few Demons More by Kim Harrison and Wicked by Nancy Holder & Debbie Viguie- if you're interested). I had just gotten into my car and put my packages down when I noticed something odd going on in the parking space next to mine. The car next to me had pulled forward so that it was halfway into the space in front of his, but another car had also pulled into the same space but from the correct side. And neither car was moving. Both cars were driven by men, and they were both just sitting there. Waiting for the other guy to back down, I guess. Eventually though the guy next to me backed his car back into his space and I could leave without worrying about getting bumped. The whole thing was ridiculous- testosterone poisoning taken to the absurd- and I have to wonder if they realized how stupid it made them both look, squabbling over a parking space like little boys on a playground. Things that make you go "Oy."

If I don't post tomorrow, have a very Happy Easter everyone!

Thursday, April 05, 2007


Thirteen of my favorite SciFi/Fantasy Authors


This is, in no way whatsoever, a complete list. Attempting to keep these lists within the Thursday 13 framework, I will do a separate list for paranormal and vampire fiction (later).

1. Tolkien- big Duh there. I first read the Hobbit when I was ten, and the Lord of the Rings not long after. One of the many and varied reasons I love those books are that they could take me to places that I could only dream about otherwise (and I do mean that literally- I grew up in South Florida where the closest thing to a mountain is the landfill- and I didn’t see snow until I was 18- and that was in the summer). These books had mountains and caverns and Rivendell and Rohan (and horses- oh my). And there were themes and metaphors and symbolism enough for my inner lit geek. Hmm, maybe it’s time to reread?

2. Mercedes Lackey- The first books I bought of hers were Oathbound and Magic’s Price (I bought them together) and practically swallowed them whole. Reading the Tarma and Kethry books led me to discover that she’d written short stories about them, including how they met. (The Valdemar and related books also have maps). Hunting down those short stories led me to #3 on this list. Only recently have I read the Diana Tregarde books, having read about some really bizarre reactions people have had to that series. I like them, Diana is a cool character and I hope she gets the chance to write more.

3. Marion Zimmer Bradley- must confess upfront- I have yet to finish the Mists of Avalon- don’t know why. I have read Firebrand, and most of the Darkover books, Black Trillium, and several of the Sword and Sorceress collections. Reading the Darkover books, I found it fascinating to watch the development of the world that she’d created: the magic, the societies, as well as those that live on the fringes of those societies, especially in the Shattered Chain, Thendara House, and the Forbidden Tower. (Have I mentioned the mountains on Darkover?)

4. David Eddings- particularly the books with Belgarion- the Belgariad, the Malorean, Belgarath, and Polgara. All good books that I still reread periodically. Interesting to see the different ways that writers create a system of magic, and how they describe that system. (Have I mentioned the geography of his world- complete with totally awesome maps- and mountains).

5. Fiona Patton- Painter Knight is my favorite book in her first series, and I enjoyed The Silver Lake and am interested in seeing where she takes the characters introduced in it.

6. Tanya Huff- I’ve pretty much read everything she’s written, including the short stories, except the hard scifi. Love the Keeper’s Chronicles, and the Quarters, and of course Blood Price and its series (and the tv show naturally- although it still seems weird without Tony), and would love to see more of Tony (and Henry).

7. J. K. Rowling- Book 7 is coming out. Yeah. No more Harry Potter? Sigh. Something new and completely different from her? We can only hope.

8. Anne Bishop- Shiloh Walker is running a contest to give away the first book in this series, so if you’ve not read it yet, go here and log in and maybe you’ll win your own copy (cause I’m not lending you mine- nope, no way, no how).

9. Holly Lisle- I’ve read the World Gates trilogy (and again with the mountains and the snow), several of her collaborations (Glenraven and Into the Rift), and just about everything on her webpage, with several more books on Mount TBR.

10. Elizabeth Vaughan- Warprize, Warsworn, and Warlord are all great books, with believable characters in a world that deserves more books. (Yep, they’ve got mountains).

11. Michelle Sagara- Another series I’d love to see continue, the world is totally real while you’re reading it, the characters are believable, and I felt a great empathy for the main character as the author discovered the worst things that had happened to her and made her relive them.

12. Moira Moore- Resenting the Hero and The Hero Strikes Back are two very funny books, the relationship between the two main characters is believable, funny, and grows. The world created in these books is also a place I’d like to visit again, please.

13. Wen Spencer- A Brother’s Price is an interesting book with an intriguing premise and the story and the language to make the premise believable. Hopefully having created this world she’ll give us a chance to visit it again.

Cleaning my apartment I came across several duplicate copies of some of my favorite books, so I’m going to give them away. Post a comment on this entry telling me a couple of your favorite first books and I will send two lucky winners a couple of my favorite first books (if scifi/fantasy isn’t your thing let me know and I’ll pick from the Thursday 13 list posted last week). Open to everyone, the contest will run until midnight Saturday and I will draw the winners Sunday morning.

Links to other Thursday Thirteens!
1. Joely Sue Burkhart
2. Ravaj
3. You're next!
(leave your link in comments, I’ll add you here!)



Get the Thursday Thirteen code here!


The purpose of the meme is to get to know everyone who participates a little bit better every Thursday. Visiting fellow Thirteeners is encouraged! If you participate, leave the link to your Thirteen in others comments. It’s easy, and fun! Be sure to update your Thirteen with links that are left for you, as well! I will link to everyone who participates and leaves a link to their 13 things. Trackbacks, pings, comment links accepted!